~kalaya
Tuesday, January 14, 2014
Current events
In Grand forks just the other day a bunch of innocent horses were taken to be rescued. The owner of the horses had a abused and starved 12 poor creatures. Only 8 had been able to he rescued because 2 had sadly passed on. I think that people who are not responsible shouldn't be able to have animals for this reason. The animals have to suffer when they have done nothing wrong and if people no they are not capable thy should sell, adopt out or call somebody for help. This kind of problem has been happening all over the word and I STRONGLY believe that animal cruelty had to stop.
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Hi Kalaya, I'm glad to see that you care for animals.You made a few mistakes. I think you should've split your long list into one or two paragraphs and you had some spelling errors.
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DeleteHi, I think it's great that you chose a topic that you are very passionate about, However I wish you could have added a link so I could have read about this firsthand myself! Other than that and the grammatical errors that Shallon mentioned, good job.
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